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[자기계발]/[English essay] 2021. 3. 18. <영어 자소서> 첨삭 & 배운 내용 첨삭 받은 내용 욕구가 솟구쳤다 = It made me have a strong desire I was an average student = > I was not a top stuent 이것이 좀 더 영어같다. 뉴욕타임스 같은 거 읽어서 이런 뉘앙스를 터득하라 equip sb with sb sb에는 myself 가 들어가도 된다 saving은 가산이라서 savings 라고 써야한다 한국사람이 많이 틀리는 것. consider (as) as는 생략 된다. 고로 그냥 consider A B 하면 된다 be expsoed to diverse cultures => acquire a deeper unsderstanding of diveres cultures 이런식으로 paraphrasing 하는 능력 키우기 kn..
[자기계발]/[English essay] 2020. 11. 10. CAM 13 / TEST2 / TAKS1 The given bar chart illustrates information regarding the proposition of families divided into two groups which owned *accomodation and rented accomdation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011 over a 90-year period with each interval of around 10 except *the first two bar charts. The figures are measured in percentage. Overall, one particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figures was th..
[자기계발]/[English essay] 2020. 11. 5. CAM 12/ TEST 5/ TASK 1 The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in differernt age groups who did regular phsycial activity in 2010. The bar chart given describes data regarding the proposition of males and females who have a daily workout in 2010 from Australia in six different age categories. Overall, except men in the youngest group, a majority of females' group have a exercise more than ..
[자기계발]/[English essay] 2020. 10. 31. CAM14 / TEST4 / TASK2 Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? There is a continuous increase relating to the number of people who select to work by themselves without going to corporations. This phenomenon results from the low job opportunity which has been emerged a *dacade ..
[자기계발]/[English essay] 2020. 10. 25. Cam 14 / test 3 / task2 - Revision Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Music has an effect that bonds people across the world. Although #there is some controversy whether or not music is actually beneficial for uniting people across barriers such as age or tradition, I firmly believe that music can bond peop..
[자기계발]/[English essay] 2020. 10. 24. Cambridge 14 / test 3 / task 2 (agree/disagree) Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion? The significiant effect of musical sounds (or sound?) has been spread across the world although there is a controversy whether the acoustic sounds are one of beneficial ways to considerably contribute to people regardless of tranditions a..

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